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[Psybot - End of my world]

Front page worthy!

Dang man...this is a great track. Definitely worthy of being on the frontpage along side with ParagonX9 :).

[Speed Loader]

sick track man!

The vocals (the growls, not the screams) reminded me alot of Anal Stench or that band which has the members of Sinister in it...i think they're called Houwitser.

Fucken good work \m/

[Valiant]

Nice :)

This is a great little song. However, you should have brought the drums forward abit more in the mix ^_^

tedJohnston responds:

by request...the drums have been made louder!!! muhahaha. i'm glad you liked it, i had fun making it. please check out some of my other work. thanks again for the review!

cheers an g'day.

-Ted Johnston

[Funk'D]

Doesn't offer alot

In most cases, I'd say this song is horrifically dreadful, but since you're obviously new to music, I won't be so harsh.

To be quite honest, it sounds like you've grabbed a bunch of loops and just mashed them together without any real structure. There's no hook in the song which makes me want to keep listening, and the production has about as much depth as a piece of cardboard.

To get the feel of things, you're really going to have to work with something that offers a bit more creativity than garage band. Chucking loops together does not a musician make.

DwightMcCallum responds:

That's just what I did.. Just mashed together a bunch of loops, because there weren't many other options! I know what you mean about GarageBand restricting creativity! :(

I'm looking into different audio-authoring programs right now.

Thx for the thoughtful review!!! ^^

[My loop]

nice

The drums started out perfect and spot on...but after the first drum fill...it started going out of time.

Nice effort though ;D

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Yeah I know I have gotten much better with my drum program so looking back the drums are so off it's sad.Oh well though thanks for the review.

[Steady On Now...]

okay...

Sorry man, but it sounded like a rip off of break stuff by limp bizkit :P

[Savage Slaughter/Dismemberment]

Awesome :D

Hahaha you rock dude!

You're a pretty damn good guitarist for a 14 year old.

I also love your oldschool way of recording by dubbing on to tapes...that's so bloody awesome X-D

Drums need a bit of work though dude. The constant double kicking loop wasn't doing it for me X-)

FlameMesial responds:

Thanks a million, Dood! I'm glad you think dubbing on tapes is bloody awesome. I would've changed some of the drum beats in here but nothing worked better than using double-bass all the way through. I didn't like the way the lead came out on this one. Where the high-pitched guitar sounds were, there was supposed to be the sort-of 'Psycho' (the film) sound (you know, the 'ree' sound). Thanks again, Dood!

[Bond, James Bond... Metalized!]

Sick!

Damnit dude you beat me to the punch!

I've been meaning to do a cover of the james bond theme (or a slightly abridged and modified version)...not much point now though :P.

Excellent work dude :)

All my 5 are belong to you!